A Screaming Patient And A Bot Doctor

Hey {{first_name|Bro}},

I am writing this email while standing in a long line of patients at the hospital.

But my mom got a little pain in her knees, so we are in the hospital.

And the place we live in, there's no knee specialist doctor, nor would we go to some private clinic.

But we decided on a government hospital for an immediate solution to the pain. 

And in the government hospital, to meet the doctor, medicine, and 

That's why there are always a lot of people in a long line.

We got our number, we went to a lady doctor, the only doctor in the hospital at that moment.

The moment my mom was about to explain her problem to the doctor, a patient from behind screamed, then entered the room like a Tom Cruise entry during a bold situation.

But he had asthma and was breathing too hard. 

The doctor, newly joined and young, just asked what happened, then wrote some medicines and injections, then left.

The patient was explaining his problems, but there was no more listening, just some medicines. 

My mom explained for like 5 minutes, she listened, wrote, and then gave the prescription. We left.

And the problem is she didn't diagnose the problem in the right way, so she didn't get to the root of the problem and couldn’t solve it. 

Also, she was in a hurry, and she was seeing patients as only numbers, not humans.

While copywriters see copywriting always as AI-generated, they don't know that they have to diagnose every pain point and objection of the reader they are writing for.

First, by doing research on every platform where people mention their problem, or by going through that experience to write good copy.

At the end,

So, make sure to diagnose your audience before writing a single word.

-AshuRex

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