COPY ROAST TIME

Yo,

DISCLAIMER TO WRITER: WELL, DON'T FEEL BAD AND GOD, BE NEUTRAL ON MY REVIEW AND KEEP IMPROVING.

Now let's get into it.

Headline 1 —> I thought I was the last guy to be in the troubles. 

Headline 2 —> "Nothing is permanent in this wicked world, not even our troubles." 

                                                             — Charlie Chaplin. 

“I thought I was the last guy to be in the troubles. Every boy experiences his first heartbreak or a low life phase, and mostly goes down feeling unmotivated and lost. 

I was in this phase last January. I believe that when the boys find themselves in the heartbreak phase, low life phase, after that, you either go up or go down. 

It's kinda like a crossroads. And today's most influential influencers, you see, most of them come from rock bottom. 

I broke up with her in March. And at that time, I went down. (For a while) But also, I knew that, if I sat down with hands on hands, things would be no different from now. So I joined the gym.

The primary focus was on the gym (before it was a girl). You see, at that moment, I was skinny, bones, and my face was tomato red after 5 push-ups. 

But I kept my head up, hitting the gym every day 6x a week. But why am I telling you about my low-life phase? Some of my followers have DM’d me telling me about their problems, and some of my friends have told me in person, too. 

So the only answer is: "Nothing is permanent in this wicked world, not even our troubles." — Charlie Chaplin. 

Even though troubles aren't permanent, you can see me, I was like somebody had stuck skin on bones, now you see I have added some sort of muscles. I will give you the blueprint on how to get out of that phase DM "trouble 

Headline 1: If you have a crazy personal brand, then I might open it as a fan, but it's not intriguing enough.

Headline 2: It's like a quote but long, which might not work for email, but Threads and X are okay.

The first 2 lines are solid according to the headline, which is justifying why I am reading.

But

I was thinking you're gonna tell your story, but you started with some fluff in one line. So cut this line especially, then get to the story immediately: "It's kinda like a crossroads. And today's most influential influencers, you see, most of them come from rock bottom."

Amazing storytelling afterwards. The line "my face was tomato red after 5 push-ups."

It's just ahhhhh.

Everything is good, and now I understand why you said the Charlie Chaplin line. This thing will work on X. Email needs to be more 1:1 personal.

That's it. And it's very rare to get a compliment from me lol.

So good work, Parth boy.

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