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Hi {{first_name|Bro}},
I’m writing this email on a bus after a while.
From the window seat, I can see that the sun is coming up with bright golden rays.
(Exactly at 6.45 am, I looked at my watch at that moment)
While I was looking at it, I thought about writing.
The sun moves from east to west according to people’s viewpoint, which is a law of nature. And a copy feels better when it moves the same way as the sun.
I mean, most writers break their flow with extra words that don’t help, or they become directionless by relying 100% on A.I.
So, try handwriting the copy the way you talk. Let each line flow till the last line of your copy.
That's what makes the message easy to feel and easy to read. That’s how I wrote this email.
And make sure to have a better flow in your newsletter, too.
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-AshuRex
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