Hey {{first_name|bro}},
Do you know what's emptier than this email?
Your reader's brain….
Yes.
After they finish reading an unfocused AI SLOPS on the internet or any terrible copy, their brain looks something like this:
Look, the email you are reading right now has ONE idea: focus on a single topic of the empty email.
That's it.
But most emails don't do this.
They start with copywriting tips, then jump to gym routines, then talk about lunch, then throw in some random shower thought.
By the end, the reader had forgotten everything.
If I talked about an empty box, then my weekend plans, then my favourite protein shake, then back to copywriting, you'd close this email confused as hell.
But because I'm staying on ONE topic (single idea per email), you'll actually remember this.
So, next time you write, ask yourself: “What's the ONE thing I want them to remember?”
Then delete everything else.
- AshuRex
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