Hey {{first_name|Bro}},
I was editing one of my reels with full joy and open legs for my shorts channel last night, until I got a one notification in Discord:
“Review My Copy, @AshuRex”
😵😵
And that’s the common thing you will see in every copywriting server, where the copy submission channel is more silent than any graveyard, lol.
But in my server, i atleast look at people’s copy, if it’s interesting enough, I decide to review it and suggest making their good copy better.
Lastday, this guy sent me these 10 headlines to review:
Why Women Over 40 Are Switching to This $40 Back Device (and Throwing Out Their Pain Pills)
For Dog Parents: The Hidden Cause of Chronic Itching (and How to Fix It Naturally)
He Retired at 65… Then His Energy Collapsed. This Clinically Tested Formula Brought It Back
5 Small Adjustments Dermatologists Recommend to Reduce Wrinkles in Just 10 Days
The Acne Breakout Trigger Almost No Dermatologist Talks About (Has Nothing to Do With Hygiene)
Visible Differences in 6 Weeks? Women Over 40 Say Yes/ Women Over 45 Swear This Cream ‘Turns Back the Clock’ by Targeting Collagen Breakdown
The Silent Hormonal Chain Reaction After Pregnancy That Ages Skin and Hair
Overthinking in Relationships Comes From This Psychological Mechanism — Not Insecurity
If You Notice Odor ‘Down There,’ It’s Usually Not Hygiene — It’s Bacterial pH Imbalance
How to Trigger Your Partner’s ‘Chase Instinct’
And I like these, and here's how I reviewed:
Useful, Unique And Ultra Specific. It's Good with a mechanism
If you will add a little fear, then they will read it further: For Dog Parents: This Hidden Cause Is Quietly Making Your Dog Suffer From Chronic Itching (But There’s a Natural Fix)
Break in flow lol. Using "but" after collapsed will be better here, and all is good.
It doesn't feel unique, but it's genric line for the audience you’re writing for, so make it something unique, then it will be better
It's a good one so far
One-word rhetorical questions looks AI generated if didn’t used correctly, and here it doesn’t suit this headline, rewrite it..
It's more kinds giving the info and educating, than selling in a sales letter, good approach.
Hyphen indicates to AI generated in this era, but it's commonly found on old direct response ads and sales letters, so ok.
It's a question headline, direct, solves one problem, it's good enough
The overall headlines are good, and a funny thing is that AI can write good headlines because it’s shorter and easier to process. But it s*cks at emails and long-form copy.
You can use AI for subject lines and headlines of copy and can leavrge with it by adding your human wording.
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-AshuRex
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